For the Class of 2027 · The 10-Week Finish Line
One Goal: The Personal Statement and All Four PIQs — Finished, Polished, Approved.
For 10 weeks, your student gets unlimited rounds of expert async feedback on the essays every college reads — the Common App Personal Statement and all four UC PIQs — until each one earns their editor's sign-off. Plus five extra edits for supplemental essays.
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Why this program exists
Most Families Don't Want More Essays. They Want the Big Ones Done Right.
Five essays decide more than everything else your student writes: the Common App Personal Statement and the four UC PIQs. This program pours unlimited expert rounds into exactly those five — on your student's schedule, not a class schedule. Summer program? Job? Travel? It fits around all of it, because every round is asynchronous.
- Kickoff strategy brief: your editor reviews the profile & list first
- Unlimited feedback rounds on PS + all 4 PIQs
- “Approved” means editor sign-off: submission-ready
- Tracked changes + recorded video on every round
- One dedicated editor for the full 10 weeks
- 5 supplemental-essay edits included, used however you like
How it works
Submit. Revise. Resubmit. Repeat Until It's Right.
Kickoff brief
Your editor studies your student's profile and college list, then aligns the essay strategy before the first draft.
Rounds of feedback
Submit a core essay, get expert edits + video within 3 business days, revise, resubmit. One essay in review at a time keeps focus sharp.
Editor sign-off
Each essay works toward approval — your editor's professional judgment that it's ready to submit.
Supplements
Spend your 5 included edits across supplemental essays — five essays once, one essay five times, any mix.
The investment
One Price. A Definite Outcome.
The 10-Week Finish Line
- Unlimited async rounds on the Personal Statement + 4 UC PIQs, until approved
- 5 supplemental-essay edits included
- Dedicated editor · 3-business-day turnaround per round
- Kickoff strategy brief aligned to your college list
- Pace check at week 6 so nobody hits deadline season behind
The fine print, in plain English
Clear Boundaries Are the Whole Point.
- Unlimited rounds apply to the 5 core essays only (PS + 4 PIQs)
- One core essay in review at a time — it comes back within 3 business days
- Supplemental edits are capped at 5 submissions; more are available as Edit Packs
- The 10-week clock starts at your scheduled kickoff
- One extension available if life happens: 2 weeks, $500
- Paid in full; no refunds after kickoff
- We edit and coach your student's writing — we never write for them
- This program does not include an admissions guarantee
Questions families ask
Answers Before You Ask.
What if the essays aren't approved by week 10?
Students who submit consistently finish with room to spare — and your editor flags pace at week 6 if the rhythm is slipping. If life genuinely gets in the way, there's a one-time 2-week extension for $500.
Why only 5 supplemental edits?
By design. This program's job is the five essays every school reads. Supplemental essays scale with your list — 3 schools or 13 — so they fit better in an Edit Pack sized to your actual schools. Your advisor can pair the two.
What does “approved” actually mean?
Your editor's professional sign-off that the essay is submission-ready: the story lands, the structure works, and it does its job inside the full application. It's the same expert judgment our team applies to every application we review.
Unlimited... really?
Really — on the five core essays, one at a time, for the full 10 weeks. Some students take four rounds, some take ten. The price doesn't change.
Ten Weeks From Now, the Hard Part Is Done.
Start now and the core essays are finished before deadline season starts — instead of during it.
Enroll in the Finish Line →